Nicole+Brown+Lounge+1v6

1ac - priyank - awesome :)

1ac cx - Ish - your cx losses focus

1nc - rachel pretty clear good that you put so much on case, but I wish your frontline was divided between the likelihood of prostitution AND how to weigh thing

2ac signposting on case needs to be fixed your arg about wives being sacrificed instead of prostitutes is interesting; the CP also doesn't adjust how SK acts dont read your "k of da" as a separate (or reference it at all in road map) - just make it an answer and force the neg to be smart enough to do cross aps i think you need more DA presses against allied prolif

2nc be more careful when kicking out of positions - its good to extend a specific 2ac argument and to make an argument about them not getting hte permutation the cap overview is tooo long itnegrate more links in about the !AC rhetoric/specific tags.

1nr i think you need to do more impact calc on why war = worsen structural violence and in particular for the S Korean Pros You should also do more to defend the "bias" of your ev